2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.可能用到的词汇：剪纸 paper-cutting 书法 calligraphy
优秀范文：
Dear Peter:
I"m very glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Week activity will be held in your school. It"s a good opportunity for you to learn more about culture.
First a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice. As a traditional Chinese art, paper-cutting includes different themes like plants, animals, stories and so on. Additionally, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people"s interest, which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture. What"s more, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food, are surely welcome. And a Chinese painting show is always attractive.
I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.
，我爱范文
