这首诗写得很好，还有许多有关描写万里长城的诗词，我推荐大家有时间去读一读。万里长城是在我国北方辽阔土地上，东西横亘着一道绵绵起伏、气势雄伟，长达一万多里的长墙，这真是人间的美景啊!
东峰，又称朝阳峰，峰顶有朝阳台，在此是观日出的最佳地方。山不在高，有仙则名。华山据传是众多神仙聚居的地方。道家仙境。传说宋太祖赵匡胤与华山隐士陈抟老祖在一个孤峰，上有棋台，那就是他们下棋的地方。陈抟又叫希夷先生，范文，是一个有道行的仙人，二人经过商议，越匡胤以华山来打赌。结果输给了陈抟，按事先订立的条件，华山自此成为道家的道场且永有纳粮。在东东峰的东崖上，有一天然图案。大家看到了吧，像不像一只巨掌?这只巨掌20余丈，五指参差不齐，中指直贯顶峰，每当日光照射，五指跃然如悬图上。这就是所谓的“关中八景”之首的“华岳仙掌”。据说在很久以前，华山和中条山相连，右足登开中条山，给黄河开出一条通道，现在我们看到的就是河神的手指在托华山时留下的指印。
关于长城，还有一个动人的民间传说。有一个普通农家女叫孟姜女，丈夫新婚当天被衙役抓去充当修长城的民夫。孟姜女风餐露宿来到长城后，知道丈夫早已累死了，她就伤心地大哭起来，哭到哪里哪里的长城就“轰隆”“轰隆”倒了，长城不一会就被哭倒了八百里。
长城总长约6700千米，最有名的八达岭长城随山势起伏，南北两边都有高峰耸立着。大家请跟我来。看，长城主要由关隘、城墙和烽火台三部分组成的。城墙是长城的主要工程，特别坚固，是用巨砖、石条等材料砌成的。关隘就是长城沿线的重要驻兵据点。大家请看看旁边，城顶上有一个垛口，每个垛口上都有一个小口，那就是嘹望口。垛口下面都有一个枪击口。至于烽火台，是有军情时点燃烽火来传递信息的建筑。现在，大家站在长城上远眺，是不是前看不到头，后见不着尾呢?
China's Great Wall is in the human history of civilization the greatest architectural engineering. It located at China's capital Beijing. He is China is most famous, greatest construction. The Great Wall is the miracle which our country ancient times the working people created. Starts from the Warring States time, constructs Great Wall has been a big project. It has 6700 kilometers. Our country ancient times millions of working people have contributed the wisdom for it, has drained away the blood and sweat, causes it to become a world big miracle. Therefore said that the Great Wall is China's symbol
To the northwest and north of Beijing, a huge, serrated wall zigzags it's way to the east and west along the undulating mountains. This is the Great Wall, which is said to be visible from the moon. Construction of the Great Wall started in the 7th century B.C. The vassal states under the Zhou Dynasty in the northern parts of the country each built their own walls for defence purposes. After the state of Qin unified China in 221 B.C., it joined the walls to hold off the invaders from the Xiongnu tribes in the north and extended them to more than 10,000 li or 5,000 kilometers. This is the origin of the name Of the "10,000-li Great Wall". The Great Wall was renovated from time to time after the Qin Dynasty. A major renovation started with the founding of the Ming Dynasty in 1368, and took 200 years to complete. The wall we see today is almost exactly the result of this effort. With a total length of over 6,000 kilometers, it extends to the jiayu Pain Gansu Province in the west and to the mouth of the Yalu River in Liaoning Province in the east. What lies north of Beijing is but a small section of it.
白帝城现在建筑有2600多平方米，大门依然书题“白帝庙”、“白帝城”。主体建筑明良殿，庄严雄伟，内塑刘备、关羽、张飞、诸葛亮等塑像;西侧武侯祠内则是诸葛亮、诸葛瞻、诸葛尚祖孙三代塑像、新塑《刘备托孤》泥塑群像和《杜甫行吟》大型瓷画，更为白帝城增添了文化内涵、祠前有六角十二柱“观星亭”，造型具有民族风格，传说是诸葛亮夜视星象的地方、白帝城内收藏的文物书画极为丰富。《诗史堂》有李白、杜甫、陆游的古板木刻像和塑像及部分诗作版本。
游客们，长城不但历史悠久，而且工程浩大，施工艰难。根据科学家的计算，如果用修筑长城的砖头和大条石筑成一道宽一米，高五米的墙，这道墙竟可以环绕地球一周多呢!大家想想，要采制这么多的砖头和大条石，并且要运送到陡峭的山峦上砌筑起来 ，是多么的不容易呀!其中要有多少人为它付出血汗和生命啊!这里还流传着“孟姜女哭长城” 的故事呢，大家就地休息一会儿，让我来为大家讲讲这个动听的故事吧：
The Great Wall is one of the great interests.It builds in Qin Dynasty.At first it is used to protect the people from the enemies. The Great Wall’s total length is more than 7000 kilos,the highest wall is about 10 meters.There is beautiful scenery and trees with green shade around The Great Wall.It attracts many tourists.As the saying says,“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.”It is China’s pride!
古代城垣设施不仅修建敌楼、箭楼作用武之备，还修建魁星楼以祭把主宰文运之神魁星。西安魁星楼建在南门城楼东，后遭兵火毁坏。后来在原址上复建魁星楼，值得一看。
大家看!这块石碑上写的是“不到长城非好汉”，这是毛主席题的一句话。请大家在这里拍照留念，下面自由活动，两小时后在大门口集合。
