This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldn＇t do well at all and often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited, but father and mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. I believe I can do better next time.
这个暑假我在一个快餐店找到一份兼职工作。一开始，我就做不好，而且经常犯错误。我是很低的，但父亲和母亲鼓励我很多。所以我开始尝试我最好的。渐渐地，我可以做一个非常好的工作。当我第一次收到我的报酬时，我感到非常激动。我已经决定在这个寒假里找一份兼职工作。我相信我下次能做得更好。
，范文
